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TTU Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Is there anything wrong with my sentence?
Soon being a college graduate, I want to further my education by earning my master’s degree elsewhere of Dallas, TX.
Soon being a college graduate, I want to further my education by earning my master’s degree elsewhere of Dallas, TX.
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Hello, TTU—and welcome to English Forums. The first clause is awkward. I suggest: I will soon receive my BA/BS, and I would like to pursue my master’s degree outside of Dallas, Texas.
- Hello, TTU—and welcome to English Forums.
- The first clause is awkward.
- I suggest: I will soon receive my BA/BS, and I would like to pursue my master’s degree outside of Dallas, Texas.
- 'TX' is a postal code for addresses; use the full name when composing formally.
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Hello, TTU—and welcome to English Forums.
The first clause is awkward. I suggest:
I will soon receive my BA/BS, and I would like to pursue my master’s degree outside of Dallas, Texas.
'TX' is a postal code for addresses; use the full name when composing formally.
The first clause is awkward. I suggest:
I will soon receive my BA/BS, and I would like to pursue my master’s degree outside of Dallas, Texas.
'TX' is a postal code for addresses; use the full name when composing formally.
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Thanks, your sentence sounds better. If anyone wants to point out more errors in my original sentence please do so.
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