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Random95 Posted 14 years ago
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From now on there will be fines for litter- this would have a long-lasting effect. Then proceeds will be donated thanks to which there will be recycling bins all over the school. Furthermore, we will even sponsor an endangered animal which will increase our school rating. This special event could be watched on TV tonight thanks to our staff who spread the information to the TV presenters.
  

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random95 Do the sentences make sense here ? Yes, but I would revise them a little. Maybe something like this: From now on there will be fines for littering.

— CalifJim

  • random95 Do the sentences make sense here ?
  • Yes, but I would revise them a little.
  • Maybe something like this: From now on there will be fines for littering.
  • Some of the proceeds will be used to provide recycling bins throughout the school, and some will be used to sponsor the protection of some species of endangered animal, which will have the additional benefit of increasing our school rating.
  • Our staff has informed the local TV station of our project, and as a result the donation will be given in a special televised event tonight.
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random95Do the sentences make sense here ?
Yes, but I would revise them a little. Maybe something like this:

From now on there will be fines for littering. Some of the proceeds will be used to provide recycling bins throughout the school, and some will be used to sponsor the protection of some species of endangered animal, which will have the additi
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