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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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hello.. I would like you to read the following text and let me know if it is written well.
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Join Sputer {artist name} and reveal the amazing truth behind the mysterious ancient dragonfly. The nice sparking looks of this innocent bug may sometimes cover his flaming characteristics as he wonders around nature as a predator. You should be aware of the Sputer sorcery of classic basses and embrace his flying melodies. Take on a journey to meet your old self and find out the origins of magic. Explore your consciousness with the hypnotizing harmonica and let every little puff carry your destiny to a brighter destination.
  

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There are lots of problems with this paragraph. I really don't get what you are saying. ) reveal the amazing truth behind the mysterious ancient dragonfly.

  • There are lots of problems with this paragraph.
  • I really don't get what you are saying.
  • ) reveal the amazing truth behind the mysterious ancient dragonfly.
  • ) as a predator.
  • ) and embrace his flying melodies.
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There are lots of problems with this paragraph. I really don't get what you are saying.

Join Sputer {artist name} and (?) reveal the amazing truth behind the mysterious ancient dragonfly. The nice sparking looks of this innocent bug may sometimes cover his flaming ( flamboyant?) ch

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