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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
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Hello everyone,
I would be pleased if you could state if these sentences taken from the letter of request are right (in terms of style, grammar, etc.
) Thanks in advance.
"Trainings would be a perfect opportunity to encourage students to participate."
"It is known that you value physical education and sport activities highly."
"Should our training coincide with any celebration or another special event being scheduled, we could also train outdoors."
"Organising activities in which both students and team members could take part is also worth being given careful consideration as potentially beneficial to both sides. "
I would be pleased if you could state if these sentences taken from the letter of request are right (in terms of style, grammar, etc.
) Thanks in advance."Trainings would be a perfect opportunity to encourage students to participate."
"It is known that you value physical education and sport activities highly."
"Should our training coincide with any celebration or another special event being scheduled, we could also train outdoors."
"Organising activities in which both students and team members could take part is also worth being given careful consideration as potentially beneficial to both sides. "
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" "Organising activities in which both students and team members can take part is also worth being given careful consideration as potentially beneficial to both sides. "
- " "Organising activities in which both students and team members can take part is also worth being given careful consideration as potentially beneficial to both sides.
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"Training would be a perfect way to encourage students to participate."
"It is known that you value physical education and sport activities highly."
"Should our training coincide with any celebration or another special event being scheduled, we could also train outdoors."
"Organising activities in which both students and team members can take part is
"It is known that you value physical education and sport activities highly."
"Should our training coincide with any celebration or another special event being scheduled, we could also train outdoors."
"Organising activities in which both students and team members can take part is
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Thanks a lot! But I wonder if it will be better: "Organising activities in which both students and team members would take p
But I wonder if it will be better: "Organising activities in which both students and team members would take p00
Hi I think the last sentence is not fully corrected by Vivek(vvr_97).
I would say:
"Organising activities in which both students and team members can take part is also worth being given careful consideration as potentially beneficial to both sides. "
"Organising activities in which both students and team members can take par
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