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Pieter Posted 23 years ago
Too ( depressive)
Too much I desire you could finally hear me,
Too green's the grass for the sky's blue breathe,
Too stupid I am for this genial nation, really,
Too many red cells are in your blood, death.
Too green's the grass for the sky's blue breathe,
Too stupid I am for this genial nation, really,
Too many red cells are in your blood, death.
Top answer
Too short Too unfinished
- Too short Too unfinished
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I like readers saying too short. It's much better than hearing that it's too long. And anyway size doesn't always matter.
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yes that's right but I have the feeling that llines 3 and 4 do not link.
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Once someone called me master of contradiction. That's why it doesn't link.
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Sorry, I wouldn't agree with you unless you explain me why. The problem is I cannot see the contradiction.
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If you can see the contradiction it's real life. It's not a poem any more.
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That's too vulgar. Thanks. Forget about what I said and anyway it's not a contradiction
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Humour is never vulgar. Sorry, if I hurt you.Anyway i'll organize a poetry-analyzing competition for teenagers in September, from my poems. I'll translate some of the winning essays and I'll post them here if you want. You'll be able to see what different readers can get from the same lines.
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