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Nicholetta Posted 23 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

The double exposure basketball twins (sad story)

once there were two children named re'mal and jamal.They went to go play basketball with thier uncle and suddenly said at the same time i want to be a basketball player when i grow up.

"ahhhh,as the crowd goes wild,"the commentator said.Jamal dished it to re'mal for the winning shot.After the game was over they both had an interview.The commentator said unto jamal and re'mal,"what do you plan on doing after college?""they both said play with the orlando magic.

When jamal was walking to basketball practice all of a sudden jamal had bumped in to joey wilson on accident (plays for basketball team).After jamal had done that,joey wilson said unto him "watch your back".During practice re'mal and jamal was running a play then surprinsingly joey happened to be in the way,so he got hit with the ball.With so much rage a fight had broken out.The coach had broken it up and suspended them for the whole season.

Boom,Boom,Boom,someone had gotten shot.So as Re'mal and i went to go check it out we had found out that it was coach dudley who had gotten shot.It was very depressing,but suddenly something had struck me when the principal called me to the office i saw the cops with hand cuffs.That was the last day I had seen that school.

Ring,Ring,Ring,"I wonder who that could be said re'mal".It was the prison facility,the said jamal was conviced for murder.When i went to school i questioned the principal "why was my brother convicted of murder"."well,we also found joey eilson dead to and the only person he had conflicts with was jamal",said the principal."Ya'll have the wrong person",I said.When i got home I thought to myself how could this be,then something hit me.I remember when joey said he was going to get jamal back,so now I'm thinkin he framed jamal.When I went to the prison I said to jamal,they got it all wrong.jamal said nonething."it was an exposure,that was jamal's last words.

Not knowing anything they had took jamal to the gas chamber and killed him.I couldn't live like this,so i killed my self(boom,boom,boom).This is what happens when you lose a loved one some times.
  

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very cool and vivid passions expressed with such a short capture of space...
loved it!
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11/6/03

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