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Eva Posted 23 years ago

The Desert

My first poem..I wrote it 10 years ago!

The eagles fly over the sky,
the nature seems so wild,
the sun is hot, the sand the same,
there is no hope, there is no way

you lose your heart,
you feel so down,
when you think,
you're far from town

you are in the desert,
in a dead world,
where your life
becomes much worse

the water is a treasure,
the trees so rare,
you are searching all the time
for a breath of fresh air...
  

Top answer

I am in a Desert! I need . By the way I liked your poem.

  • I am in a Desert!
  • I need .
  • By the way I liked your poem.
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I am in a Desert! I needEmotion: paradise. By the way I liked your poem.
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xexe Emotion: smile . By the way where are you from?
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By the way are you from Mars?
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i got confused sorryyy
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Let me say just one thing, it's a feeling that we'll have to learn how to live with. Confusion is part of life.
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Eva, beautiful name, awful poem.Emotion: smile
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If you can write beautifully 10 years ago, I wonder about your next destination poem ?

Tell National Geographic that about the desert.I love to watch people overcome the uncertanties of the desert.
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yeah what about your next destination?. It can definitely be suffocating in a desert.

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