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Hello, my name is Ciuncanu Iuliana, i’m 20 years old and I want to attend to one year course at the Faculty of Medicine in your country.

One of the most valued professions in the world is that of a doctor. Every little girl's dream is to become a doctor when she grows up, including mine. Ever since I was little, I loved taking care of my pets. I am a great lover of animals, so until now I have taken care of dogs, cats, parrots, fish, turtles, bunnies, even a spider.

I think I deserve this scholarship because I am passionate and determined to become a successful doctor. I am ambitious and hardworking with the aim of fulfilling my dream, and being accepted at this schoolarsheep places me one step ahead towards a bright future.

Over the years I have faced a lot of difficulties and I have seen a lot of people and animals suffering. By pursuing medicine, I will have the opportunity to join the heroes of this planet and heal any suffering living being.

I am currently studying at the Faculty of Dental Medicine in Timisoara and I want to develop my medical knowledge, and this offer is the perfect opportunity to develop and pursue a career in this field.

Another reason why I should be accepted is the fact that I know English very well and I am open to living this experience in a foreign country.

I appreciate your consideration, and I look forward for your response.

Build apple 378 · Answer

Hello sir, my name is Ciuncanu Iuliana and I am interested in your proposal of helping in the local tourist office. I am 20 years old and a student at the Faculty of Dental Medicine.

Firstly, I am a responsible and punctual person and I think I am the right person for this job. I have been studying English since elementary school and I try to improve my vocabulary every day. In middle school, I participated in several English language competitions and also, in the high school final exam for a foreign language, I chose English and I was qualified with the highest grade.

Secondly, I am a sociable soul and I like to help people and working for you would be a good time to interact with foreign people and have new experiences. I keep in touch with many friends who live abroad or attend a university there and I consider it a benefit because this is also a way to refine my English.

Finally, I have little spare time and two mornings of work a week is exactly what I am looking for in a job. Moreover, I am trying to become more independent and earn my own money, and this post is the perfect chance to start a new chapter.

I strongly believe that I’m proper for this position, and i hope you will give me a moment to show my prowess. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and I look forward to work in this field.

Teechr · Answer

1- What is the expected word count for that letter?

2- Which areas/points were you asked to cover?

3- Is there a URL (link) that outlines the requirements?

4- What is the submission deadline?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

This information will be in your application form. Do not repeat this information in the motivation / cover letter. Do people call you Ciuncanu?

~~Hello, my name is Ciuncanu Iuliana, i’m 20 years old and~~

I want to attend to one year course at the

(Normally, we specify the name of the university. "Faculty of Medicine" is one department in a university. There may be many universities in a country that offer medical courses. Medical schools normally are a 4 or 5-year program. They are not just one year. ) Faculty of Medicine in your country.

One of the most valued professions in the world is that of a doctor. ~~Every little girl's dream is to become a doctor when she grows up, including mine~~. (It is not good English, and it is not every girl's dream. Some girls want to be singers or dancers or teachers. You need to make points that are reasonable and believable. ) Ever since I was little, I loved taking care of my pets. I am a great lover of animals, so until now I have taken care of dogs, cats, parrots, fish, turtles, bunnies, even a spider. (It sounds like you are interested in Veterinary Science. )

I think I deserve this scholarship because I am passionate and determined to become a successful doctor. (That is not exceptional. Every person who writes such a letter is passionate and determined. What sets you apart from all the others? The committee that reviews applications is looking for those that stand out as being unique or different. If your arguments are exactly the same as everyone else, you have no advantage. ) I am ambitious and hardworking with the aim of fulfilling my dream, and being accepted at this schoolarsheep (wrong spelling. Also a scholarship is not a place. .) places me one step ahead towards a bright future.

Over the years I have faced a lot of difficulties and I have seen a lot of people and animals suffering. By pursuing medicine, I will have the opportunity to join the heroes of this planet and heal any suffering living being. (You need to be more specific and convincing. This could be the argument of the majority of applicants. Why did you select this particular university? What qualities do you have that make you unique from the other applicants?)

I am currently studying at the Faculty of Dental Medicine in Timisoara and I want to develop my medical knowledge, and this offer is the perfect opportunity to develop and pursue a career in this field. (What field? You did not mention any specialty, such as sports medicine, gynecology, surgery, pediatrics, neurology, or dermatology.)

Another reason why I should be accepted is the fact that I know English very well (Probably all the applicants mention these points.) and I am open to living this experience (unnatural) in a foreign country.

I appreciate your consideration, and I look forward for your response.

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