0
Inchoateknowledge Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

punctuation

are the following sentences correctly punctuated:

i go out on saturday nights, and, therefore, i am usually very hazy on sundays,

i go out on saturday nights; therefore, i am usually very hazy on sundays,

i go out on saturday nights. therefore, i am very....?

i like peter, while jane likes paul.

'while' is not a coordinator, and, as i percieve the use of comma when two independent clauses are joined by a conjunction word that is not a coordinator, in these cases comma is to be neglected.

an eye opener explanation and any punctuation error spotted would be very much appreciated; thx in advance.

inchoate knowledge
  

Top answer

For a start you need to give these a capital letter: Saturday, Sunday, Jane, Paul, I and the first letter in all sentences. Then all sentences need to end with a full stop (period). sentence 1 - I'd drop the first comma.

  • For a start you need to give these a capital letter: Saturday, Sunday, Jane, Paul, I and the first letter in all sentences.
  • Then all sentences need to end with a full stop (period).
  • sentence 1 - I'd drop the first comma.
  • sentence 2.
  • I don't think you need both the semi-colon and the 'therefore'.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

3 Answers
0
For a start you need to give these a capital letter: Saturday, Sunday, Jane, Paul, I and the first letter in all sentences.

Then all sentences need to end with a full stop (period).

sentence 1 - I'd drop the first comma. sentence 2. I don't think you need both the semi-colon and the 'therefore'. If you take out the therefore it's ok. sentence 3. ok. sentence 4 I'd say no comma re
0
i like peter while paula likes paul.
i like peter= s v o.
while = a subordinating conjunction (a conjunction that is not a coordinator)
paula likes paul= s v o
while paula likes paul= fragment
an ' independent clause+fragment' sentence does not require a comma, so 'i like peter while paula
likes paul' is a correct sentence.

i go out on saturday eve

Related Questions