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NhanDinh Posted 20 years ago
How're you doing today? I need help. I have to turn in a recomendation of whether or not the City should advertise in magazines or any types of business news magazines. I know you all read a lot of business papers, I am wondering if any of you have ever heard of "Business Xpansion Journal?" I don't know which magazine is most effective and whether we should advertise at all for the City.
Would you also provide to me Tim's (from the marketing groupe) e-mail address? I am not really sure whether he is Jim/Tim but he seems the only friendly guy from that group.
Thank you in advance for your help and I look forward to hearing from you all soon.
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How're you doing today? I need help. I have to turn in a recomendation of whether or not the City should advertise in magazines or any types of business news magazines. I know you all read a lot of business papers, I am wondering if any of you have ever heard of "Business Xpansion Journal?" I don't know which magazine is most effective and whether we should advertise at all for the City.
Would you also provide to me Tim's (from the marketing groupe) e-mail address? I am not really sure whether he is Jim/Tim but he seems the only friendly guy from that group.
Thank you in advance for your help and I look forward to hearing from you all soon.
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Hi, I assume this is an email, so an informal style is OK. I've made some suggested changes. <<<<< not really necessary.
- Hi, I assume this is an email, so an informal style is OK.
- I've made some suggested changes.
- <<<<< not really necessary.
- You might begin, 'Sorry to bother you'.
- I need help.
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Hi,
I assume this is an email, so an informal style is OK. I've made some suggested changes.
Best wishes, Clive
How're you doing today?<<<<< not really necessary. You might begin, 'Sorry to bother you'. I need help. I have to turn in a recomendation of whether or not the City should advertise in magazines or any types of business new
I assume this is an email, so an informal style is OK. I've made some suggested changes.
Best wishes, Clive
How're you doing today?<<<<< not really necessary. You might begin, 'Sorry to bother you'. I need help. I have to turn in a recomendation of whether or not the City should advertise in magazines or any types of business new
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Hi Clive,
In your response, you had the following first sentence. What is the difference between the sentences that are written as "I don't know which magazine is most effective" and "I don't know which magazine is the most effective"?
In your response, you had the following first sentence. What is the difference between the sentences that are written as "I don't know which magazine is most effective" and "I don't know which magazine is the most effective"?
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Hi,
What is the difference between the sentences that are written as
"I don't know which magazine is most effective" This is a bit more general. It suggests that I may not know anything about the types of magazine we are talking about, perhaps not even their names.
"I don't know which maga
What is the difference between the sentences that are written as
"I don't know which magazine is most effective" This is a bit more general. It suggests that I may not know anything about the types of magazine we are talking about, perhaps not even their names.
"I don't know which maga
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