Need Proofreads for Two Research Papers

Hello. I am new to this forum. My friend and I wrote 7 pg. research papers for our English class comparing USA education to an assigned country's education. Our teacher was supposed to check it over and give it back with comments (to help us) before turning it in for grading, but we missed it. We are desperate right now to get it checked over by someone. I searched online, and this seems to be the only reasonable English forum. If someone could read over our papers (2 papers, 7 pgs each), I would be extremely happy because this paper is worth 30% of our grades.

Here is the link:
http://rapidshare.de/files/19394040/papers.zip.html

Edit: I accidently made two threads. I thought I had to make an account to post. Please delete the other thread.