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Sur Posted 23 years ago
My wish..
Hi,
After that peculiar feelings 'i really wish you were with me..'
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Wish you were with me..
When the Sun shines through the clouds
The flowers dance in tune with the gentle breeze
When birds chirp from branch to branch
Singing song of love…
Then I feel lonely
And desperately wish you were with me.
When cold winds pierce
Making my spine shiver and the limbs numb
When the deathlike silence
Is occasionally broken by my disturbed breathing
Then I feel lonely
And desperately wish you were with me.
I wait for you patiently to experience
The lovely spring
Glorious mornings
Golden sunset
Romantic rains
And the warmth of summer nights
***
After that peculiar feelings 'i really wish you were with me..'
***
Wish you were with me..
When the Sun shines through the clouds
The flowers dance in tune with the gentle breeze
When birds chirp from branch to branch
Singing song of love…
Then I feel lonely
And desperately wish you were with me.
When cold winds pierce
Making my spine shiver and the limbs numb
When the deathlike silence
Is occasionally broken by my disturbed breathing
Then I feel lonely
And desperately wish you were with me.
I wait for you patiently to experience
The lovely spring
Glorious mornings
Golden sunset
Romantic rains
And the warmth of summer nights
***
Top answer
I like the sense of tranquil intimacy this poems has. Maybe lacks some action, so close, so distant. Maybe some intimacy got lost on the way.
- I like the sense of tranquil intimacy this poems has.
- Maybe lacks some action, so close, so distant.
- Maybe some intimacy got lost on the way.
- Strangers in the night ...
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I like the sense of tranquil intimacy this poems has. Maybe lacks some action, so close, so distant. Maybe some intimacy got lost on the way. Strangers in the night ...
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