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Jacko Posted 23 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

My thesis statement...

I am not planning to ritually post snippets of every one of my papers here...I hope so. But I just wanted to post my thesis statement. Once I finish creating my online journal system, then I will post it there. For now, I need some sort of outlet; so, patience folks, I'll be here for quite some time.

Affirmative Action’s attempt to mend the racial disparities in higher education that has plagued America does not constitute to a feasible solution; instead, it forges the same dissented environment that faces the same struggle it tries to eradicate.
  

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I can't wait to see it.
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I just finished my essay. I redid a lot of it to try to simplify the language. I am not actually expecting anyone to read it, but if you want to, please do.

Affirmative Action: An Advancement or a Backtrack?

In the summer of 1619, the first Africans were brought to Jamestown, Virginia not to live as free settlers but as subordinate slaves. They worked strenuously for Whites,
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You seem to have been working really hard! I think you did a good job!
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Well I should thank you, maj, and the two people who read my first draft (this is my fourth draft) and made suggestions. Whew! Honestly, this is the only time I can actually tell myself honestly that I've written something clear and well. My paragraphs are more developed than my previous essays. It might not be as good as other people's essays, but I am improving on my writing, and that's
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; can you help me make a good thesis statement on brwon vs. borad of education ?
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Anonymous; can you help me make a good thesis statement on brwon vs. borad of education ?
Only if you first tell us what you plan to write about. A thesis statement summarizes what you are going to tell us in your essay. You first have to do your research, form an opinion, have an idea of what you will write and the points you will make, and THEN you can do yo
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Emotion: stick out tongue5 line down second to last paragraph. It should be "to minorities," not ",to minorities violates" Sorry but I always have

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