My first dairy in English.

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I'm not an English speaker. For improving my English skills, I decided to write dairy in English. I hope someone can read my dairy and correct the mistakes in the text. Thanks in advance.

As usual, I got up very late today. When I was sleeping, a mobile call waked me up. It's my older colleague Yang. He found a new job days ago. Yang told me about his new job. He felt the work was not busy and there are plenty of time to learn. A few days later, he would participate in a big project. For customer requests, the project development team must be on site, so he would go to work in a new place soon. I asked him whether would he go home in seven days' holiday. He said that he would leave and stayed for 3 or 4 days. I invited him to visit my new house and met some older colleagues. He promised it. We talked over twenty minutes. After ended the chat, I was going on sleeping immediately.
At twenty to fourteen, I waked up. I washed my tooth and face, then went out to have a lunching. In fact, it should be breakfast for me. I'm used to have breakfast at this time. When I was back home, it was already fifteen o'clock. I opened my notebook and began to work. A new day was starting!

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

Hi Leslie, keeping a diary is a good idea. Keeping a dairymeans you look after cows! Corrections are in italics. You need to practise your verb tenses and also learn about the 24 hour clock (14.00, 15.00) and 'normal' times (2pm, two, 3pm, three) as it is not appropriate to use 24 hour clock in the way that you are trying it. Nice diary though, keep it up! I wish I got to sleep in till 2pm...

As usual, I got up very late today. When I was sleeping, a mobile call woke me up. It's my older colleague Yang. He found a new job days ago. Yang told me about his new job. He felt the work was not busy and there was plenty of time to learn. A few days later, he would participate in a big project. For customer requests, the project development team must be on site, so he would go to work in a new place soon. I asked him whether he would go home fn seven days for a holiday. He said that he would be away for 3 or 4 days. I invited him to visit my new house and meet some older colleagues. He promised that he would. We talked for over twenty minutes. After ending the chat, I went back to sleep immediately.
At twenty to two, I woke up. I washed face and brushed my teeth, then went out to have lunch. In fact, it was breakfast for me. I'm used to having breakfast at this time. When I got back home, it was already three o'clock. I opened my notebook and began to work. A new day was starting!

LeslieYear · Answer

Thanks very much! As you said, I will keep it up!

Anonymous · Answer

0 01i00As usual, I got up very late today. When I was sleeping, a mobile call waked me up. It's my older colleague Yang. He got a new job days ago. Yang told me about his new job. He felt the work ,not busy and there is plenty of time to learn. After few days he would participate in a big project. For customer requests, the project development team must be on site, so he would work in a new place soon. I asked him whether he would go home in seven days' holiday. He said that he would leave and stay for 3 or 4 days. I invited him to visit my new house and to meet some older colleagues. He promised it. We talked over twenty minutes. After the of the chat, I went to sleep immediately. 02br
00At twenty to fourteen, I waked up. I brushed by teeth tooth , washed my face, and then went out to have lunch. In fact, it is breakfast for me. I'm used to have breakfast at this time. When I was back home, it was already fifteen o'clock. I opened my notebook and began to work. A new day was starting!02i0-

Anonymous · Answer

don't keep it up an till you sentence make sence

Anonymous · Answer

LeslieYearI'm not an English speaker. For improving my English skills, I decided to write dairy in English. I hope someone can read my dairy and correct the mistakes in the text. Thanks in advance.As usual, I got up very late today. When I was sleeping, a mobile call
waked me up. It's my older colleague Yang. He found a new job days ago.
Yang told me about his new job. He felt the work was not busy and there
are plenty of time to learn. A few days later, he would participate in a
big project. For customer requests, the project development team must
be on site, so he would go to work in a new place soon. I asked him
whether would he go home in seven days' holiday. He said that he would leave and stayed for 3 or 4 days. I invited him to visit my new house and
met some older colleagues. He promised it. We talked over twenty
minutes. After ended the chat, I was going on sleeping immediately. At
twenty to fourteen, I waked up. I washed my tooth and face, then went
out to have a lunching. In fact, it should be breakfast for me. I'm
used to have breakfast at this time. When I was back home, it was
already fifteen o'clock. I opened my notebook and began to work. A new
day was starting!Mod note: It's not immediately clear if Anon edited this or not.

Anonymous · Answer

dear sir!
hi. iam Apple, iam from vietnam. im an accountant. Iam too surprise about your feeling. U have a same way to learn english as me. I wrote dairy in english to improve my english skill. I hope one day, i can speak english fluently. I hope we can make friend. I prepare to have an interview in english.
Nice too see u!

Anonymous · Answer

hello friends, i am rooni from bangladesh. i am very poor in english since it is not my native language. i seek some advice from a elder brother to improving my writing skills maintain grammar. he said to me if i want to improve my writing skill maintaining tense, i need to practise some essay which solely written on present simple tense, past simple tense and future simple tense. if i practise some essay written on different tense than it will be so easy to capture tense in my writing paragraph. so, someone here who can help me by giving some paragraph written on different area on tense? this is my email: Email Removed. please friends do so for me and i will be pleasure............thnks

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