As the twilight coloured my ambience i strolled through that unforgettable lane where i lost my heart which i never found again
She had sparkling eyes blended with innocence of a deer which made my heart sing a song which she could not hear
As my eyes floated through her oceanic eyes her face erupted in a luminous smile a smile for which i could have travelled a thousand mile
Ended the lane, came night with extasy, we were in moonlight day ended, the next evening came searching for my heart, i went back to the lane
My angelic queen was standing there wearing starlight in her hair mysterious looks, digging deep in my heart as i looked, i forgot all my words
Days passed, weeks passed, months passed talking to her was touching the stars thought of burning my passion on a paper born was this poem, will a relationship be born.
Top answer
promising.
— Maj
promising.
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hey hitchhiker and maj thanks so much for your compliments, and please pray i get her someday..hehe will look forward for suggestions on improvement. take care ashish