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Advertising is helpful for our City, but our biggest problem right now is to decide which magazine is most effective. I had asked some of my former co-workers at the GA Dept. of Economic Development if they have ever heard of Business Xpansion Journal and which business magazines is most read by practitioners of business recruitment and expansion. None of them have recognized or familiar with it and the majority of them have recommended Expansion Management and Site Selection magazines. These two are best-known economic development magazines. KNOWATLANTA magazine is more focused to people who want to relocate from where they live. And, we should not advertise at all in this magazine.
  

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Hi, Advertising is helpful for our c ity, but our biggest problem right now is to decide which magazine is most effective. I had asked some of my former co-workers at the GA Dept. of Economic Development if they have ever heard of Business Xpansion Journal and which business magazines are most read by practitioners of business recruitment and expansion.

  • Hi, Advertising is helpful for our c ity, but our biggest problem right now is to decide which magazine is most effective.
  • I had asked some of my former co-workers at the GA Dept.
  • of Economic Development if they have ever heard of Business Xpansion Journal and which business magazines are most read by practitioners of business recruitment and expansion.
  • None of them have recognized or are familiar with it and the majority of them have recommended Expansion Management and Site Selection magazines.
  • These two are the best-known economic development magazines.
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Advertising is helpful for our city, but our biggest problem right now is to decide which magazine is most effective. I had asked some of my former co-workers at the GA Dept. of Economic Development if they have ever heard of Business Xpansion Journal and which business magazines are most read by practitio

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