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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Help with English homework about a work experience

Hi, my name is Nina and I´m a German high school student. In January I did a practical work experience in a public nursery school where I got to work with babies and toddlers.

My English teacher wants me to write an essay (150 words, past tense!) about my experience and I have no idea how to get started. Could you give my some tipps? That would be awesome.

Thanks, Nina
  

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Hi, What did you do there? What parts did you like? Why?

  • Hi, What did you do there?
  • What parts did you like?
  • Why?
  • What parts did you dislike?
  • Why?
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Hi,

What did you do there?

What parts did you like? Why?

What parts did you dislike? Why?

Write about stuff like that.

Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Clife, thanks for your help. I`d be pleased if you`d correct my essay. Thanks a lot Emotion: wink

My practical work experince
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Hi Janina,

If I were your teacher, I would give you a very good mark for this. You have written honestly and thoughtfully, in a way that shows you have a gift for working with children. The children were lucky to have you.

Write again if you need any more help. Post it to this thread so that I will not miss it.

Good luck in your career. Clive

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Thank you so much. You really helped me out there Emotion: wink

Love, Nina
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can someone please help me,

im writing a letter to a company to allow me go thier for my work experience but i do not know what i should include. can some one please give me some things i must include in my letter and what i can include

thanks
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Hi,

Try to get ideas this way.

You are talking face to face with the owner of the company. What would you say to him about this?

Write a rough letter, and we will help you with comments. OK?

Best wishes, Clive

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