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It doesn't sound right to me. Incomplete. I would have done sth different.
- It doesn't sound right to me.
- Incomplete.
- I would have done sth different.
- You were not very inspired: What do you think?
- A hesitant star leaves in my garden are fallen shining yellow.
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It doesn't sound right to me. Incomplete. I would have done sth different. You were not very inspired:
What do you think?
A hesitant star
leaves in my garden
are fallen
shining yellow.
What do you think?
A hesitant star
leaves in my garden
are fallen
shining yellow.
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Your right kitkattail, a Haiku needs to have this structure:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
A / hes / i / tant / star
shi / ning / yel / low / are / fal / len
leaves / in / my / gar / den
I wrote one myself:
No book of wisdom
Will give me advice on how
to love you Marjon
Pieter you wrote a good Haiku!!
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
A / hes / i / tant / star
shi / ning / yel / low / are / fal / len
leaves / in / my / gar / den
I wrote one myself:
No book of wisdom
Will give me advice on how
to love you Marjon
Pieter you wrote a good Haiku!!
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