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AmensLove Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
English Homework - A lead (introduction with a conflict)
Hi,
I was wondering if any of you guys are good at English and can help me out please...
I have a few random pictures on the bottom of Man vrs. Man, Man vrs. Nature, and Man vrs. Himself and I was wondering if you guys can help me make a lead with a conflict for each of em!...PLEASE!
like about a paragraph each...if you can please! ( A Lead is like an introduction)...ya!
SO basically: can you guys help me write about a paragraph. an introduction and a CONFLICT on those pictures that are on the bottom...also...when you guys end the paragraph...my English teacher also wants other students to add ideas into it!
i spented a lot of time on this and I cannot start a single lead for any of these:
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Please and thank you very much!
EDIT:
If you were to look at this picture without “Man vs. Man” all you would see is a hallway. But if you add a two human you will see one man having a sorrow for the other. It might not be sorrow but also anger. Each and every single person in this world goes through many hard times with people. Life is life; we just all live it with people who bring us down or people who make our life the best.
I was hopping over buildings and all of a sudden a man pops up in front of me. Attacking me with all his might and I dodged the first strike, with a counter-attack to his face. I didn’t really understand why he attacked me but it seems really strange.
The guy was walking back home and he felt a gust of wind. Then he looked up and he saw and felt that a giant wind or hurricane was coming in. He was terrified. So he looked around for something to hold on to. He saw a big durable tree quite far away but it he knew it was too late. So he looked beside him and grabbed a small twig, hoping it would last, until the wind was gone.
may you please help me out? to make it better?
I was wondering if any of you guys are good at English and can help me out please...
I have a few random pictures on the bottom of Man vrs. Man, Man vrs. Nature, and Man vrs. Himself and I was wondering if you guys can help me make a lead with a conflict for each of em!...PLEASE!
like about a paragraph each...if you can please! ( A Lead is like an introduction)...ya!
SO basically: can you guys help me write about a paragraph. an introduction and a CONFLICT on those pictures that are on the bottom...also...when you guys end the paragraph...my English teacher also wants other students to add ideas into it!
i spented a lot of time on this and I cannot start a single lead for any of these:
[URL=/][/URL]
[URL=/][/URL]
[URL=/][/URL]
[URL=/][/URL]
[URL=/][/URL]
[URL=/][/URL]
Please and thank you very much!
EDIT:
If you were to look at this picture without “Man vs. Man” all you would see is a hallway. But if you add a two human you will see one man having a sorrow for the other. It might not be sorrow but also anger. Each and every single person in this world goes through many hard times with people. Life is life; we just all live it with people who bring us down or people who make our life the best.
I was hopping over buildings and all of a sudden a man pops up in front of me. Attacking me with all his might and I dodged the first strike, with a counter-attack to his face. I didn’t really understand why he attacked me but it seems really strange.
The guy was walking back home and he felt a gust of wind. Then he looked up and he saw and felt that a giant wind or hurricane was coming in. He was terrified. So he looked around for something to hold on to. He saw a big durable tree quite far away but it he knew it was too late. So he looked beside him and grabbed a small twig, hoping it would last, until the wind was gone.
may you please help me out? to make it better?
Top answer
Hello AmensLove, and welcome to the forum. What you will find here are people very willing to help you with any mistakes you make in your writing, but you will NOT find people here who will do your homework for you. You must make an effort - even if you think it is poor and needs a lot of help.
- Hello AmensLove, and welcome to the forum.
- What you will find here are people very willing to help you with any mistakes you make in your writing, but you will NOT find people here who will do your homework for you.
- You must make an effort - even if you think it is poor and needs a lot of help.
- I promise, no one here will say "That's terrible!
- " We will instead help you make your writing better.
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Hello AmensLove, and welcome to the forum.
What you will find here are people very willing to help you with any mistakes you make in your writing, but you will NOT find people here who will do your homework for you. You must make an effort - even if you think it is poor and needs a lot of help. I promise, no one here will say "That's terrible! Who told you you could write?" We will inste
What you will find here are people very willing to help you with any mistakes you make in your writing, but you will NOT find people here who will do your homework for you. You must make an effort - even if you think it is poor and needs a lot of help. I promise, no one here will say "That's terrible! Who told you you could write?" We will inste
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If you were to look at this picture without “Man vs. Man” all you would see is a hallway. But if you add a two human you will see one man having a sorrow for the other. It might not be sorrow but also anger. Each and every single person in this world goes through many hard times with people. Life is life; we just all live it with people who bring us down or people who make our life the best.
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