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Tad1270 Posted 20 years ago
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could you correct my abstract. Thanks
This report provides a summary of the author’s experiences as a student attachment . The attachment, 22-weeks, are part of the author’s subject in XXX University. Author’s duty is improve the Quotation System and Quotation Manager for using of sale engineers. Quotation System is used in creating and storing the quotations. Quotation Manager is used by manager to monitor and control the creating quotations process.
Two systems were designed by using Visual Basic Professional 6.0 with the supporting in MS SQL Server 2000 for database and Photoshop CS 9 for user interface. DSPLRFQ is reserved database for Quotations. Two systems use this database for verifying login also storing all details about quotations. Stored procedures were written to provide essential accessibility to the database in order to view, update and delete both quotations and company. Toolbar option is to increase the visually effects. File attachment allows staff can attach any thing to the quotation. Output word file is support for receptionist in creating contract. Many options have been added to this Quotation System allow staffs can do whatever they want with changing of inside data. The Manager Systems also allow manager can get statistics view by employers’ name and by any categories in quotations attributes.
Apart from the student’s direct role in the projects, his involvement in such a large software project gave his interesting insights into project management practice, designing entire software and the complete the Software Development Life Cycle.
Two systems were designed by using Visual Basic Professional 6.0 with the supporting in MS SQL Server 2000 for database and Photoshop CS 9 for user interface. DSPLRFQ is reserved database for Quotations. Two systems use this database for verifying login also storing all details about quotations. Stored procedures were written to provide essential accessibility to the database in order to view, update and delete both quotations and company. Toolbar option is to increase the visually effects. File attachment allows staff can attach any thing to the quotation. Output word file is support for receptionist in creating contract. Many options have been added to this Quotation System allow staffs can do whatever they want with changing of inside data. The Manager Systems also allow manager can get statistics view by employers’ name and by any categories in quotations attributes.
Apart from the student’s direct role in the projects, his involvement in such a large software project gave his interesting insights into project management practice, designing entire software and the complete the Software Development Life Cycle.
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Hi Tad, Welcome to the Forum. This is a bit long. I've only time to correct the first paragraph.
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Hi Tad,
Welcome to the Forum.
This is a bit long. I've only time to correct the first paragraph. I suggest that you make corrections and next time post it in our Writing Forum. Just go back to Home, and you'll find it easily.
As a general comment, I suggest that the importance of your report is what you learned from the experience. Focus on yourself. Don't refer to your
Welcome to the Forum.
This is a bit long. I've only time to correct the first paragraph. I suggest that you make corrections and next time post it in our Writing Forum. Just go back to Home, and you'll find it easily.
As a general comment, I suggest that the importance of your report is what you learned from the experience. Focus on yourself. Don't refer to your
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Hi Clive,
In your last sentence of your reply, you have this phrase "the quotations creation process." Normally one would use the nouns "quotations" and "creation" independently and not use them as adjectives, I think. What are the binding rules regarding the usage of nouns as adjectives? What and how many are permissable?
In your last sentence of your reply, you have this phrase "the quotations creation process." Normally one would use the nouns "quotations" and "creation" independently and not use them as adjectives, I think. What are the binding rules regarding the usage of nouns as adjectives? What and how many are permissable?
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Hi,
I was just trying to correct Tad's English without changing too much of the way he originally wrote it. If I were writing it myself, I might say something like "the process for creating quotations."
I wouldn't say there are binding rules. However, generally speaking, I'd say one noun as an adjective is fine, more than that can become a bad habit.
I was just trying to correct Tad's English without changing too much of the way he originally wrote it. If I were writing it myself, I might say something like "the process for creating quotations."
I wouldn't say there are binding rules. However, generally speaking, I'd say one noun as an adjective is fine, more than that can become a bad habit.
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Thank you, Clive.
What are the rules regarding the use of single nouns to modify other nouns? Would you say if those modifying nouns are being used adjectives in English-speaking countries and are more or less can be found in print form, then we are allowed used them as adjectives?
What are the rules regarding the use of single nouns to modify other nouns? Would you say if those modifying nouns are being used adjectives in English-speaking countries and are more or less can be found in print form, then we are allowed used them as adjectives?
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Hi,
What are the rules regarding the use of single nouns to modify other nouns?
A noun used in this way is usually singular, eg a car salesman, three car salesmen.
I looked in Swan's Practical English Usage. He has a long section on 'nouns in groups' that you would find interesting. It covers the types of meaning conveyed and the common situ
What are the rules regarding the use of single nouns to modify other nouns?
A noun used in this way is usually singular, eg a car salesman, three car salesmen.
I looked in Swan's Practical English Usage. He has a long section on 'nouns in groups' that you would find interesting. It covers the types of meaning conveyed and the common situ
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Thank Clive and Believer .
I didn't notice that can not post any essay here.
thank for your valuable corrections.
I didn't notice that can not post any essay here.
thank for your valuable corrections.
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