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Guest Posted 23 years ago
Grammar

Correct sentences

I need your help in correcting the following sentences ( if they are wrong grammatically )

1. John is in a deep come and he has to be admitted to the Beijing hospital .

2. It is not the policy of the government to restrict the freedom of students to speak on the matters related to their personal rights .

3. There is a great opportunity for job seekers in the field of information technology if they possess the much-desired skills .

4. Mary has many furniture in her home.

5. There is a little hope for this poor man to survive in an-ever changing weather condition in Europe .

Thanks for your help .
  

Top answer

They look pretty good. However... 1.

  • They look pretty good.
  • However...
  • 1.
  • The word is "coma", not 'come'.
  • 3.
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They look pretty good. However...

1. The word is "coma", not 'come'.

3. "much-desired" sounds odd to me. What about "desirable"? Comments, please.

4. "Much" instead of 'many'. Furniture is uncountable. You can say a piece of furniture.

5. "Little" instead of "a little" always shows a negative sense, which is the case in the sentence. Compare: "Despit
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4. How about 'Mary has a lot of furniture'?
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GuestI need your help in correcting the following sentences ( if they are wrong grammatically )

1. John is in a deep come and he has to be admitted to the Beijing hospital .

2. It is not the policy of the government to restrict the freedom of students to speak on the matters related to their personal rights .

3. There is a great opportunity f
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Hi,

I need your help in correcting the following sentences ( if they are wrong grammatically )

1. John is in a deep coma and has to be admitted to the Beijing hospital .

2. It is not the policy of the government to restrict the freedom of students to speak on
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Orpheus4. How about 'Mary has a lot of furniture'?
studied the "marsedens lay" for fabric layout
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Hi,

What is your question, please?

Clive
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Could you let me know if this is grammatically correct?

Scissors is used to cut the cord

<edited to delete unrelated quote from prior post>
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With scissors, use the plural verb, are.

(And don't forget to end your sentence with a period.)
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1. John is in a deep coma and has to be admitted to the Beijing hospital.

2. Good. (you might want to change the matters to just matters.)

3. Job seekers in the field of information technology have a great opportunity if they possess this much-desired skill.

4. Mary has a lot of furniture in her home.

5. There is little hope for this poor man to survive

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