Advice

Hi. I'm a Hungarian living in Romania, writing in 3 languages. I have just published a poetry volume in Hungarian very popular mostly among young readers.I would like to get advice from a native English speaker interested in poetry. I intend to publish a bilingual ( Englih - Hungarian) volume of poems, but I don't know how they sound to a native English person's ear. If anyone can help me, contact me so that I can send the poems ( 40).
E mail: Email Removed, www.peterszabo.go.ro
Best wishes to everyone and thanks.
Peter